Score: 5

"One epic fail with cheese, please?"

submission: MetalSlugMission1

date: October 23, 2007

Nah, just kidding. Background, motion tweens, sound, and plot. But still, who cares about plot? Just work on those. And I'm not going to complain too much, because my first flashes were terrible. (I went under the name of Evil_Broccoli on SFDT.com, and they removed my 1st animation for "sucking too much".)

Score: 7

"What can I say? I lol'd."

submission: DAILY DAY DICKLYTOON #200

date: October 23, 2007

While normally I dislike most flashes that have such low-grade graphics, without any plot or anything, to this, I have to say about halfway through, it became spontaneous and random enough so that I couldn't help but laugh! It was JUST, SO, RANDOM! That element saved this flash in my book. You could have put a little more into graphical work though. In this case, sound matters not, so I'm not commenting on it.

Score: 5

"My ears bled..."

submission: Snakes on a STFU

date: September 30, 2007

But I still admire the fact that even through the low quality, you at least put enough time into it to make it 2 minutes. I don't really know what else to say at this point except make it a little more animated.

Score: 2

"It's hard to make constructive critisism..."

submission: Superhero: SDO Day #21

date: September 29, 2007

...when you give us nothing to work off of.
There was no plot introduced in story, no structure really at all. No effort put into graphics, either. The music passed, while it didn't even sync up with the steps, which could have earned you some points with me. And the overall concept of your humor was not random enough to compensate for what the flash lacks overall. In short, try harder.