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However (and of course I have no room to critisize), I think you should make your animations a little more dynamic and "polished" looking. This one was a little hard on the eyes!
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Nah, just kidding. Background, motion tweens, sound, and plot. But still, who cares about plot? Just work on those. And I'm not going to complain too much, because my first flashes were terrible. (I went under the name of Evil_Broccoli on SFDT.com, and they removed my 1st animation for "sucking too much".)
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Well, this was back a while ago, I have gotten much better :D
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While normally I dislike most flashes that have such low-grade graphics, without any plot or anything, to this, I have to say about halfway through, it became spontaneous and random enough so that I couldn't help but laugh! It was JUST, SO, RANDOM! That element saved this flash in my book. You could have put a little more into graphical work though. In this case, sound matters not, so I'm not commenting on it.
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IT ISN'T RANDOM AT ALL WOW
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"Rest in peace, god be with you."
Though I can't help but think there is some irony between the real world events and this movie. I know they are not directly related, but still you have to wonder about the laceration wound of the first victim in this animation, as well as the police involvement afterwards, including the fact that a gun was used as the officers arrived. You can't really disrespect the movie or the animator in general, though, especially if you didn't know him before.
Again, rest in peace. I pray that your act of suicide does not condemn you to hell.
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Graphics? Awesome. Sound? Great. Gameplay? Who would ask for anything more than the chance to mow through hundreds of the un-dead horde!
You sir, are a genius. You need to throw in upgrading the base thingy, though. THEN it will be complete. Beautiful work.
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Living proof that you don't need to be an ActionScript god to make a fun game!
I'm sure this will inspire a lot more people to make games.
The graphics were good enough, the sounds, well, it's from an earlier series of games, right? And who doesn't like Chuck Norris? Great job, and congrats on making front page!
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But I still admire the fact that even through the low quality, you at least put enough time into it to make it 2 minutes. I don't really know what else to say at this point except make it a little more animated.
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A little more animated, I agree with that.
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"It's hard to make constructive critisism..."
...when you give us nothing to work off of.
There was no plot introduced in story, no structure really at all. No effort put into graphics, either. The music passed, while it didn't even sync up with the steps, which could have earned you some points with me. And the overall concept of your humor was not random enough to compensate for what the flash lacks overall. In short, try harder.
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Your complaint has been registered.
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As far as games go, this isn't bad. It's not great, either, but you'll get better.
And to help you along is someone who hasn't finished a single game that he has started (^_^)
1: You should make the frame advance to a screen that asks if you want to replay the game.
2: "Don't hit me!" targets would make it require more than 6 brain cells to play :P
3: It looks a little cheesy when you use MS PowerPoint clip art in your work.
This isn't even saying you will update your game, but this concept can help you in the future. Keep trying!
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You never disappoint, do you?
I loved the high-quality graphics, you put a lot of work into your... work.
Secondly, you did the voiceovers pretty well, which is always nice, like you actually give some space from the mic and talk louder, instead of muffling your voice up close, unlike other people. Oh, and funny as hell, too!
(B.T.W. Those dick jokes are awesome. I don't care what anyone else says, don't stop, it's classic.)
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